Summary of Part 1
Basically the expression of all expressed out, “clown” this volume name throughout the whole situation, hey, you can look back on the shelves of the testimonials, I said, the book’s various structures, is the most well thought out, before and after the echo and so on, you wait and see, well, I think it’s still qualified it.
The first Part 1 have not tried to write before, is to take a as a short story to write, ambush buried line, layout ideas and so on, all to this whole to consider, of course, the whole ambush, but also sure to stay there, in short, from the current effect, try to be quite successful, can be congratulated.
Characterization, haha, I will not say more, so as not to be sent razor blades ……
Of course, there must be bad and unsatisfying places, one is when “party”, “event”, “practice”, “daily routine When “party”, “event”, “practice”, “daily routine” started to show a cyclic fixed trend, my writing feeling is down, I believe that the reading sense is the same, so I tried to jump down the timeline, and after jumping, the beginning of the first cut is also relatively raw, but slowly get better, and the second is that after the death of the old Neil, the overall tone of the whole show a moment of the original gray, and then cut into the daily routine, I feel a little bit wrong, so I delete Some of the scheduled episodes were cut, and the pace was accelerated.
Secret I scheduled for six to eight, each volume will be the name of the sequence of magic potion, but not necessarily small grams of “soothsayers” way, the main must be perseverance and the theme of this one or a metaphor or something.