Chapter 444 – The Second Lesson

“Light Wu greets Master.” Xiao Lightwu had Curry Night hanging on her chest and said helplessly, “With armor on my body, it’s inconvenient for me to give a full salute, please don’t be offended, Master.”

Xue Mu almost didn’t burst out laughing: “Light Wu you’re getting funnier and funnier now, you can consider writing paragraphs.”

“It’s only because of facing Master.” Xiao Qingwu secretly said that even the bellyband is given to you, what else is there to be cowering, facing others she is not so cheerful.

Xue Mu asked, “Came to hand in your homework?”

“Yes, I went to give Ji Qingyuan routine treatment early in the morning, and this is to come to find Master to comment on my homework.” Xiao Qingwu endured for half a day and finally couldn’t hold back enough to pick up Curry Night who was rubbing endlessly on her chest, fished out a roll of manuscript and carefully said, “Please instruct Master ……”

Xue Mu was shocked, “So many!”

“Ten, eighteen molds well, I wrote eighteen scenes.”

“……” Xue Mu was like looking at a celestial being, “Don’t you know that you can put up eighteen looks in one scene?”

Xiao Qingwu was confused, “Huh?”

Xue Mu hated the iron and taught, “Besides what eighteen kinds of molds and thirty-six loose hands, that’s just a saying, as long as the general molds are written in a colorful way, that’s where the essence lies. Why do you need to write eighteen kinds?”

Xiao Qingwu hung her head and listened to the training, secretly recording her homework.

Xue Mu was embracing Liu Wanxi to read the manuscript together, and although he hated it on his lips, he was actually happy in his heart; it was fun to watch this delicate and timid Medical Fairy write a little yellow text with her own hands.

The text is quite good, that is, the scene construction is not well written, there is no few strokes of the feeling of being in the scene, slightly rigid rigid. This can not be helped, is to practice ……

Then, about that thing description is particularly interesting, a large number of filled with a serious medical terminology, no character expression no verbal communication, stereotypical writing posture movement, and even evaluated what posture is easier to give birth to pregnancy.

No jerking off point ……

Looking at it, a word suddenly flashed through Xue Mu’s mind:

Physiological Hygiene Textbook!

“Wanxi, did you have a reaction from watching it?”

“No, no……”

“Seeing that the reader has no reaction, this is a failed text.” Xue Mu sighed, still folding it up end to end and handing it back, “Keep it for yourself, and reread it in the future to be able to refer to the growth.”

These words again had the meaning of true teaching, Xiao Qingwu reddened and seriously put it away, whispering, “Please also guide master.”

“Whether this type of scene or a formal scene, the story must first be interesting. For example, this scene has a grapevine, this is a different interesting point, if you don’t play it out and just say how to move around under the grapevine, wouldn’t it be a waste?”

Xiao Qingwu nodded his head if he was enlightened, and then thought, “How can this be combined and utilized ah, my disciple can’t think of it.”

Curry Night then said, “Dad write one for my senior sister, don’t keep making it difficult for my senior sister.”

“You little thing.” Xue Mu cried and laughed, thought also a little hand itch, a long time have not written a small yellow article, this is still the classic scene, should be as the water margin liran’s well!

Do it, Xue Mu directly embrace Liu Wanxi spread out a roll of paper began to write the model.

Liu Wanxi zhangzuo do not look at, over there Xiao Qingwu curry night even with Ye Guying have come together, one by one stretched his head to see the “generation of Wenzong” writing text.

Didn’t look at two eyes, curry night the first can’t stand it, covered his eyes and ran away, not long after, Ye Guying also silently turned around and walked away. Only Xiao Qingwu was left with a reddened face, looking on in shame and admiration, wanting to go but also wanting to learn.

Liu Wanxi in her arms had long since crisped into a puddle of mud.

Pan Jinlian hanging upside down on the grapevine, this classic scene can be immortalized …… Where have the people in the other world seen it?

What big white legs open, hanging on both sides of the grapevine, but also depicted meticulously incomparable, such as the golden dragon to explore the claws, red groove bare …… Imagine that kind of woozy scene, curry night right here directly defeated. Ye Guying defeated in Ximen Qing took the plum pitcher, three hair all hit the bullseye …… Liu Wanxi paralyzed in the plum put in …… in the key out to eat when Xiao Qingwu’s face has turned into a burning cloud.

As for after hanging to do that thing, really think is wonderful, than Xiao Qingwu physiological hygiene teaching materials do not know how high to where to go.

Xue Mu threw his pen and waved his hand freely, “Take it back as a model essay, and try to understand it carefully.”

The air was very quiet, after several breaths, Xiao Qingwu took the manuscript with a cowering face, not daring to look at it again as if it had thorns on it, and quickly stuffed it into a small medicine bag.

Xue Mu leaned back in his chair comfortably, “Light Woo this little book bag of yours is quite cute ah ……”

“Thank you master for pointing it out, Light Wu went back to speculate.” Xiao Qingwu could no longer hear what Xue Mu was saying, barely saluting, she panicked and fled by grabbing the door. When he reached the door, he was almost hooked down by the threshold, and his head bumped without even having time to cry out in pain, holding his head and running away with tears in his eyes.

“Uh …… isn’t it a bit too much force?”

Liu Wanxi ate and laughed: “You accept people as disciples, also teach some real skills ah, this molestation is too much right ……”

“Reasoning this Fan Wen is their own request ah. Ahem …… although this one is particularly powerful ……” Xue Mu scratched his head, “Next time it’s better to teach her something else, it really isn’t very good.”

Liu Wanxi winks and murmurs, “Such an awesome scene, who have you played with like this?”

“No ah, not me, don’t talk nonsense ah ……”

Liu Wanxi gently twisted, her cherry lips brushing against his cheeks, her voice like a mosquito: “Do you want to …… play with Wanxi like this?”

Xue Mu thumped his heart, dry cough to hide: “Forget it, this is not good. Pan Jinlian only plays like that ……”

“When I invited you to drink half a cup of residual tea, I wasn’t Pan Jinlian ……” Liu Wanxi pursed her lips and smiled, didn’t say much more, but just said, “Well, I still have to deal with the zhengzuo, and I’ll deal with Ji Qingyuan later. We …… will be long in the coming days.”

Liu Wanxi wanted to do business, but not just to deal with Ji Qingyuan, but also to learn how to deal with political affairs on her own, this was a big deal, not a time to play around.

Although Xue Mu was tickled by her explicitness, he didn’t go to continue to disturb her, got up and went out to carry Curry Night, greeted Ye Guying, and ran to Xiao Qingwu’s palace solo courtyard, intending to teach her some serious to make up for it.

Along the way there is a palace maid to lead the way, and is dragging the child with the daughter, really take an inner palace as a backyard garden.

“Dad is so nasty.”

“The ally is perverted.”

This is the size of the two girls on the way repeatedly recited repeated words, all incarnation of Mrs. Xianglin chatter, and no other new phrases, it seems to be really do not know how to describe.

Xue Mu lowered his head to be sprayed not to make a sound, it seems that the grapevine is guilty of in addition to Liu Wanxi outside the anger of the crowd, or honestly be sprayed a good not to resist, go to teach people a little serious, this image at least a little bit of salvation……

Xiao Qingwu’s unique courtyard residence has a great history, which is when Xiahou Di in the palace residence. Secluded, secluded, a few clumps of plum blossoms in the courtyard, the environment is very suitable for Xiao Qingwu’s taste. And there are palace maid to take care of food and living, if according to her habits, if not to go for Ji Qingyuan treatment, can be a lifetime nested inside the immobile.

When Xue Mu visited, Xiao Qingwu’s face was still flushed. She couldn’t see Ye Guying, and when she saw Xue Mu bringing Curry Night, she didn’t close the door in fear, but just weakly saluted, “Master ……”

“Cough, the Fan Wen just now was my poor consideration, I pushed a little too hard, I apologize to you.”

Xiao Qingwu froze and instead shook his head, “Master this text is very good, it has taught me a lot.”

Xue Mu was stunned, “Learned what?”

“Scene and action, language and demeanor, all aspects are combined together in order to be vivid and alive, rather than just stereotypically explaining what’s in your mind and leaving it at that. As for those lustful but superficial, what Light Wool learns is the way of writing, how to depict room matters and how to depict martial arts matters are actually common, right?”

Xue Mu looked at her in a daze, he knew that the genius had already revealed himself, even if there was no Xue Mu in the world, Xiao Qingwu would sooner or later blossom into a bright light.

He took a deep breath and said with a straight face, “Last time, we talked about the three elements of a novel, so let’s talk about structure and ambush today ……”

As an entertainment company supervisor, Xue Mu had often done some internal training lectures before crossing over, and he was no stranger to the job of a guest teacher, but he had never been as serious as he was today in his classes in both realms.