Part 3 Summary
The third Part 1s called “The Traveler”, so my intended style is more relaxed, and the structure is also very simple, just as I said before, a person walks around, sees some scenery, meets some people, and accomplishes some things, but is not very deeply involved.
Frankly speaking, this kind of travelogue content is still a little difficult to write, it is not easy to create a good character, familiar with a place, there is a sense of difference in customs, and then have to leave, continue to embark on a journey, a very good test of the ability to quickly introduce the characteristics of the character, the interesting events, and now think about it, I was doing quite well before the promotion of Xiao Ke to the “Master of the Secret Puppet”, after that, I was busy with the “Secret Puppet”. Now that I think about it, before Kirk was promoted to “Master of Secret Puppets”, I was doing pretty well, but after that, I was busy buttoning up, and there were too many things to write, and basically revisiting the same place, so I omitted the previous part of the story, which was a bit hasty comparatively.
I see a lot of people say that my outline is very detailed, in fact, there is no such thing, I am detailed is a variety of settings, the outline is often the theme of this is what, to what structure to write, will pull the front of the line which pulls over, the need to set up what the new ambush, what suspense unfolding, and then it is the free play, the end of a story to think of the next story of the fine outline, so hundreds of thousands of words to think of every plot in advance, not only waste of time, but also very dull. It’s not only a waste of time, but it’s also very stilted, because you can’t really know how it’s going to play out or how it’s going to pick up afterward until you’ve actually written it, and it’s not uncommon for new ideas to strike while you’re in the middle of writing it.
For example, when I wrote the scene at the end of the last book where Kirk leaves Birkeland, I had the image and nod to the return in the undercurrents at the end of this one, and the predetermination that the brother and sister were going to make an appearance, and at the same time, when I was organizing the synopsis, there were markers that the world in the book would have to come out of the woodwork, but not in a more concrete sense than at the end, and after that, when it came to unleashing the “nightmares”, there was the idea of taking over for the “nightmare”. Afterwards, when I wrote about the release of the “nightmare”, I was inspired to bring a message to my daughter on his behalf, presenting another meaning of the end of the trip, and when I wrote about the “Grosser’s Travels” and started to set up the specific characters in the book, and got a Ruin soldier, I was suddenly inspired to think of home, and all these added up to a clear picture of how I would write the third part of the book in the end.
The third part as a whole is on the bland side, which is determined by its own structure and predetermined style, I also said in advance, want to see the end of the big event broke out friends, may be a little disappointed, as just said, I end to shape a dark current crisis dense feeling, including the appearance of the Inns, including the malice of the Mother Tree of Desire and the attack of the Rose School, will be taut with all these, set off the return of the small Kek to Bechlende Image.
Well, in the third installment one, it was difficult to write in the style of the previous travelogues, and two, it was quite a test for me to write about going down twice, to the ruins of the Divine War and to the world of the book.
Have read my previous novel friends, should know, perish the luck and the arcane under the copy of the paragraph can be said to be relatively dry, relatively rough, not very attractive, the former strong in the copy of the end of the outbreak of that, the latter, I seriously think about it, probably on the analysis of that copy of the dream and the new world bragging about God’s compulsion of the paragraph is more interesting, the other are not too good.
To the first world, many copies with the help of infinite stream structure, expanded into a world, able to slowly to write, to introduce, to padding, and many times have companions in, relatively speaking, the attraction is much higher, but a few separate copies, such as the true martial arts suspect mound that piece, there are also still dry and brown problems, rely on suspense hard to hold on.
Wudao basically did not have a copy of the next, on the war-torn region there is a section, also not much, nothing to summarize, to the secretive third part of the time, I seriously thought for a long time how to deal with these two big copies of the problem.
According to the experience of the first life, I first set the “suspense” and “companion” two points, according to the secret before and on the way to write the experience, and then set the “interesting” this point, but I always feel that there is still missing! But I still felt that it was not quite right.
Later, I remembered that when I talked with Douzi, I realized that our methods of creation were different. I wanted to tell a story with a worldview first, and then I decided on a few main characters based on the story and the background, and then I slowly added new ones, while he thought of some interesting people first, and then he decided on what kind of stories would be generated by the encounters, companions, and grudges of these people.
Although I’ve been sticking to my own creative concept, I’ve been slowly incorporating some of his experiences, so I’ve been thinking about whether it’s possible to change the word “companion” to “character” in the copy, so that we can create some unique and interesting people, and let them collide with each other to unfold stories, enriching the content of the copy and making it more interesting. I thought it would be a good idea to change the word “companion” to “character” in the copy, to create some interesting people with special characteristics, to let them collide together, to develop some stories, to enrich the content of the copy, and to make the whole copy more attractive.
The result is not bad, this is the first time when I wrote the copy, the chase subscription not only did not drop, but has been rising, close to 100,000 words, has been very interesting to write down.
To the world of the book, I made another attempt, because this copy of the first exploration will be very short, it is impossible to expand the past of the characters inside, also can not be very infectious and rendering of their sadness and joy, so I was thinking about how to express the problem.
In the end, the title “traveler” made me finalize my thoughts. As a traveler, I can’t penetrate into other people’s lives, and everything I see is just an external manifestation, and then I will have different feelings. For example, if you see a girl vomiting and crying by the side of the road when she is drunk during a trip, some people will think that she really doesn’t care about herself, and others will think that she is going through something sad. Is not experiencing something sad, some people will feel noisy.
Based on the tone of human grief and joy are not the same, I deliberately did not write Grocer Mobet their past, to render their emotions, just faithfully and objectively calmly record their words, the performance, not at all involved in their inner monologue.
If you guys look closely, you’ll see that I basically didn’t directly write about Kirk’s inner feelings in that paragraph, and deliberately left it blank.
Therefore, some people will find it a bit awkward to force emotions, some friends will be more sentimental, and some will think deeply and extend it in an attempt to restore it.
This is the effect I want to achieve, human sadness and joy are not the same, in the eyes of a traveler is even more so, laugh.
Spilling out, wrote a lot, the third part of the big summary is that the characters and the story is well combined, but the buckle is a bit anxious, some parts can be a little more stretch.